Please don't hold back. Really, really pick it apart.
Contains homosexual themes.----
It felt necessary that you should attend. It’s all that anyone’s been talking about for weeks but something about tonight begs for you to remain at home.
Frantic music forces its way out of the house, infesting the summer air. A waif of a girl hurtles out the door, pushing her way past you. She collapses on all fours and her body convulses as she soils the pristine lawn. The acrid smell of her vomit compels you to enter the party. You can’t even take one last breath to steel yourself.
The house is crammed full of people, most of them strangers. Hung from the ceiling, fairy lights, illuminating tear-stained faces and dilated pupils red, green, yellow.
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